What about your neighbours? Vegetation, sun light, wind currents, views, what do you plan to do with rainfall, integrate those with your ideas. Percentage (%) of site VS occupation, hard and soft surfaces. Prose and Poetry, keep on dreaming and carry on.
Can work at a larger scale so that you can show the relationship of your project to the city/redhook. Massing models along with plans and sections to scale need to be developed - the sketches that were done need to engage the building more into the site.
What about your neighbours? Vegetation, sun light, wind currents, views, what do you plan to do with rainfall, integrate those with your ideas. Percentage (%) of site VS occupation, hard and soft surfaces. Prose and Poetry, keep on dreaming and carry on.
ReplyDeleteI really like the sketches, it gives a stronger view of your idea. and it also gives a more understanding to your design.
ReplyDeleteCan work at a larger scale so that you can show the relationship of your project to the city/redhook.
ReplyDeleteMassing models along with plans and sections to scale need to be developed - the sketches that were done need to engage the building more into the site.